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构篇模块

构篇模块

授课机构: 星麓教育

上课地点: 校区地址

成交/评价:

联系电话: 400-663-3380

构篇模块课程详情

课时:112课时

课程特色:

突破传统,巧构人生——构篇模块,为幽默的孩子研发出了戏剧性的点面构篇,为不服输的孩子研发了情节跌宕的冲突构篇,为爱美的孩子研发了优美的散文构篇,为爱思考的孩子研发了充满哲理的明暗构篇。

极富创意的布局谋篇,帮助学生告别千篇一律、千人一面的写作困境。学会构篇,展现出与众不同的个性特质,确保在全国各类作文竞赛中,傲视群雄,勇夺桂冠。

使用教材:阳光喔教材

教学师资:星麓教育的专业

适合对象:3年级-5年级

机构优势:

1.作文教育行业翘楚

2.原创系统化彩绘教材

3.独创科学的教育理论

4.教研实力领跑全国

5.趣味生动的课堂风格

6.专精式教师团队

7.开创信息化教育新课程

开班形式:8-15人小班制教学

授课内容:

1、《冲突构篇》

冲突是世界性的问题,冲突无时不在。冲突构篇让学生在构篇过程中揭示冲突背后的本源,学会搭建人与人之间仁爱与尊重的桥梁,遵循和谐与可持续发展的自然规律,去找寻生命的意义,提升学生的人格修养。

运用冲突的五步升级法,对矛盾冲突题材进行构架,通过对人物语言、动作、神态、心理以及景物的升级描写,文章情节跌宕起伏,显得惊险、曲折、高潮迭起。

2、《点面构篇》

一个人的成长会面临三种情况:来自朋友的支持的力量、来自对手的压力和正反两种力量的同时存在。点面构篇在安排点与面的人物中,运用不同的角度去帮助学生寻找生命的意义,揭示生活的真谛。

合理安排文章的主要人物和次要人物,规划文章整体布局,做到详略得当,让文章充满戏剧化色彩。

3、《散文构篇》

在杂乱的生活中,寻找情感的寄托——唯有散文构篇。学生写自己的感情像火山一样喷发,不会有天文学家来追究其真实性;学生写迷离的泪眼荡漾着童年的欢笑,不会有心理学家去诊断其心智是否正常;学生写一首歌穿越了整个童年的梦,不会有哪个历史学家去考察穿越的真伪……

让学生把握散文“形散而神聚”的构篇特点,表达自己丰富的情感——亲情、友情、师生情、故乡情……展现出生命之美,并带给读者点点感悟,丝丝回味。

4、《明暗构篇》

事实并不等于真相,只有肯思考的人才能发现事物表象背后隐藏的光彩。明暗构篇传授三大人生智慧:给平凡的人赋予有意义的人生、给简单的事赋予非凡的意义和给普通的物赋予深刻的思考。

学生深度剖析生活中的所见所闻所思所感,精心编制故事情节(明线);同时,细致挖掘主题,使得文章的立意(暗线)更新颖、更深刻。

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